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ARMAGEDDON

sun rising our heat source moon at night shining bright sea surrounds giving life earth mountains valleys deep man monster killing creep

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Date: 10/28/2018 2:47:00 PM
It is sad but often true, how man destroys the environment, clear cutting forests, killing endangered species, over fishing the seas, putting toxic wastes into the soil that affects our pure water, all that and more. You lovely poem packs a punch Jean, with just few words. Excellent!
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 10/28/2018 2:57:00 PM
We think alike Connie. No surprise there. Thank you for your input.
Date: 10/24/2018 9:46:00 PM
Great ending, jean, congrats! Viv x
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 10/25/2018 5:00:00 AM
Morning Viv! Thank you. I hope all is well with you.
Date: 10/10/2018 9:06:00 PM
Great string of Haiku, Jean, congratulations on your win. <3
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 10/11/2018 1:31:00 AM
Thank you Eve and good morning.
Date: 10/9/2018 7:12:00 PM
Put a music to it, it can go platinum...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/16/2018 3:11:00 AM
LOL...
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 10/10/2018 12:54:00 AM
Now there's a thought....
Date: 10/9/2018 6:32:00 PM
Great job on this form Jean! Congratulations on your win in my contest and thank you for entering...Charlie
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 10/9/2018 6:59:00 PM
Delighted Charlie and thank you for the placement.
Date: 10/9/2018 4:26:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Jean, the final poem packs a punch:-) hugs Jan xx
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 10/9/2018 6:58:00 PM
Thank you Jan. Our poor Mother Earth takes a battering.
Date: 10/9/2018 1:44:00 PM
lovely world of 'ku that deserves a fine win... many congrats, jean!...huggs
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 10/9/2018 5:16:00 PM
Thank you Nette.
Date: 10/9/2018 11:59:00 AM
Great one, Jean. Congrats on your top win.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 10/9/2018 2:51:00 PM
Thank you Line.
Date: 10/9/2018 11:45:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great haiku, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 10/9/2018 2:51:00 PM
Sunshine!! Thank you. Hugs.
Date: 10/9/2018 10:11:00 AM
Jean, congratulations on your win. ~Warren
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 10/9/2018 12:54:00 PM
Thank you Warren.
Date: 10/6/2018 4:42:00 AM
Oh Jean, this will certainly be on the winner's list. You wrote it with such seeming ease. Fantastic entry for the contest! I loved it! : )
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 10/6/2018 5:44:00 AM
Good morning Connie. I wish I could have been more upbeat. It's a beautiful world. Hope all is well on your side of it. Thank you for dropping in.
Date: 10/5/2018 3:04:00 PM
They all evoke the emotions you depict Jean. The sun, moon, sea, earth, and man..sources of good and some inevitable ill-will I suppose. Best for a win, Jean.
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JEAN MURRAY
Date: 10/5/2018 5:52:00 PM
Good evening Vijay. With all the plastics in our seas now, man's mischief will end up breaking the chain. Lovely to see your comment. This is for the 1 2 3 or 3 2 1 syllable contest on nature for Charles Messina.