Armageddon

sun
rising
our heat source

moon
at night
shining bright

sea
surrounds
giving life

earth
mountains
valleys deep

man
monster
killing creep

anxietyenvironmentnaturehaiku

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Connie Marcum Wong

October 28, 2018 at 2:47 PM

It is sad but often true, how man destroys the environment, clear cutting forests, killing endangered species, over fishing the seas, putting toxic wastes into the soil that affects our pure water, all that and more. You lovely poem packs a punch Jean, with just few words. Excellent!

Jean Murray

October 28, 2018 at 2:57 PM

We think alike Connie. No surprise there. Thank you for your input.

Viv Wigley

October 24, 2018 at 9:46 PM

Great ending, jean, congrats! Viv x

Jean Murray

October 25, 2018 at 5:00 AM

Morning Viv! Thank you. I hope all is well with you.

Eve Roper

October 10, 2018 at 9:06 PM

Great string of Haiku, Jean, congratulations on your win. <3

Jean Murray

October 11, 2018 at 1:31 AM

Thank you Eve and good morning.

Pashang Salehi

October 9, 2018 at 7:12 PM

Put a music to it, it can go platinum...

Pashang Salehi

October 16, 2018 at 3:11 AM

LOL...

Jean Murray

October 10, 2018 at 12:54 AM

Now there's a thought....

Charles Messina

October 9, 2018 at 6:32 PM

Great job on this form Jean! Congratulations on your win in my contest and thank you for entering...Charlie

Jean Murray

October 9, 2018 at 6:59 PM

Delighted Charlie and thank you for the placement.

Jan Allison

October 9, 2018 at 4:26 PM

Many congrats on your win Jean, the final poem packs a punch:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

October 9, 2018 at 6:58 PM

Thank you Jan. Our poor Mother Earth takes a battering.

Nette Onclaud

October 9, 2018 at 1:44 PM

lovely world of 'ku that deserves a fine win... many congrats, jean!...huggs

Jean Murray

October 9, 2018 at 5:16 PM

Thank you Nette.

Line Gauthier

October 9, 2018 at 11:59 AM

Great one, Jean. Congrats on your top win.

Jean Murray

October 9, 2018 at 2:51 PM

Thank you Line.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 9, 2018 at 11:45 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

October 9, 2018 at 2:51 PM

Sunshine!! Thank you. Hugs.

Warren Doll

October 9, 2018 at 10:11 AM

Jean, congratulations on your win. ~Warren

Jean Murray

October 9, 2018 at 12:54 PM

Thank you Warren.

Connie Marcum Wong

October 6, 2018 at 4:42 AM

Oh Jean, this will certainly be on the winner's list. You wrote it with such seeming ease. Fantastic entry for the contest! I loved it! : )

Jean Murray

October 6, 2018 at 5:44 AM

Good morning Connie. I wish I could have been more upbeat. It's a beautiful world. Hope all is well on your side of it. Thank you for dropping in.

Vijay Pandit

October 5, 2018 at 3:04 PM

They all evoke the emotions you depict Jean. The sun, moon, sea, earth, and man..sources of good and some inevitable ill-will I suppose. Best for a win, Jean.

Jean Murray

October 5, 2018 at 5:52 PM

Good evening Vijay. With all the plastics in our seas now, man's mischief will end up breaking the chain. Lovely to see your comment. This is for the 1 2 3 or 3 2 1 syllable contest on nature for Charles Messina.

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