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Aren'T You 'I'

Aren't you 'I'...! Grown over and beyond time, as my woman, and the same period for me as your man! Seen this world and across, being a part of it; every moment was 'One' when our 'Soul' lit! Together with that unique incandescence, did that sense of nothingness make sense! With or without you is never ever a question; we are apart physically is just mind's notion! Words are mere inflexion - 'Sounds' - low 'n' high! in cherished silence does it reveal - aren't you 'I'!

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Doug Vinson

Date: 3/11/2017 9:33:00 PM

Sometimes, yes - and how sad when it really just cannot be. On "working at a marriage" or other relationship - yes, certainly, but I also assert that there must be a basic *rightness* to it. No amount of work can correct for the lack of it.

Ram Ram
Date: 3/11/2017 9:56:00 PM

Hello Vinson.... Your point is on the spot. That comes to 'Trust' and all concerned have to put in the best on building it... :) Thank you....

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/11/2017 7:10:00 PM

Deep thoughts here, Ram Ram. Two people can become truly one in marriage, but they have to want it and work at it. Great read!

Ram Ram
Date: 3/11/2017 7:58:00 PM

True and very well said! They have to 'want it' and 'work at it', incessantly. Thank you for your appreciation and I'm glad you like it.

Ram Ram
Date: 3/11/2017 7:57:00 PM

True and very well said! They have to 'want it's and 'work at it's, Incessantly. Thank you for your appreciation and I'm glad you like it.