Are You There

I know you look at me
But do you see me? 
I know you talk to me
But do you care? 
I know you listen to me
But do you hear me?
I have feelings
But are they shared?
I would tell you
But I'm scared.
Could you see me?
Could you care?
Could you hear me?
Are you there?
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Darnell Sr Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 9:24 PM
Kaylee, I feel your scorn, with the wrong choices. The silence and communication is missing. The last four lines I love. Nice touch, but even better than this: (Could you see me? Could you care? Could you hear me? Are you there?) made for the perfect ending. Solidified your poetry, great work. Warm Regards, William
Agustin Avatar
April 20, 2024 at 3:34 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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