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Are You There

I know you look at me But do you see me? I know you talk to me But do you care? I know you listen to me But do you hear me? I have feelings But are they shared? I would tell you But I'm scared. Could you see me? Could you care? Could you hear me? Are you there?

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William Darnell Sr

Date: 5/12/2024 9:24:00 PM

Kaylee, I feel your scorn, with the wrong choices. The silence and communication is missing. The last four lines I love. Nice touch, but even better than this: (Could you see me? Could you care? Could you hear me? Are you there?) made for the perfect ending. Solidified your poetry, great work. Warm Regards, William

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/20/2024 3:34:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.