Are You There

are you there?

or more appropriately

am i there at all....



can your careless heart

really set you free?



the chains are broken



the bond is broken



all that remains

is the thin gold

band

worn band.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Austin Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 12:43 PM
The simple truth of your reflection has got to get to the reader. Congrats on the selection. daver
Guzzi Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 5:24 PM
take it off....Light & Love
Christian Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 10:07 AM
aww a sad but powerful write, it is sad when we lose loved ones, I have been divorced before but God had someone far better just round that corner, thanks for your kind comments on my poem no fear, hold on to God my dear friend and you wont go far wrong, he is faithfull in all things I am living proof of that, he heals us and sets us free, God bles you from diane
Loving Iii Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 2:29 PM
i through my band away and when i tried to find it, i couldn't. but i had the imprint on my finger for a long time. even if you dont wear it keep it. john
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 9:34 AM
His loss. How have you been! God Bless. Vince
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