Are You There?

Are you with me?
Can you touch me please?
I am ignoring you again.
Simple things such as prayer,
are not simple but complex,
frightening,intimidating,
I know YOU will listen.
The problem is .
Will I?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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June 11, 2008 at 10:10 AM
So much truth in this concise poem. I know God will listen too. The ending leaves the reader with something to ponder. Many will relate to the questions you ask. Blessings to you for sharing your thoughts with us. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing. Have a good day. Karen
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