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Are You Out of Your Mind

Are you out of your mind Not happy with your lot Are you out of your mind Are all your dreams forgot Do you think you are good for nothing And there is nothing you can do Well get back in your mind Cause I have got news for you This is your life, it's you who creates get back in your mind It's never too late When you are back in your mind You have total control Of every direction, you want to go When you are back in your mind You can have all you dream So get back in your mind Give those cobwebs a clean Now you are back, your thoughts will transpire If you act on those thoughts You will have all you desire This is your life, give it your best shot Do not be lazy, live your dreams, have the lot So get back in your mind,Take total control Go live your dreams YOUR MIND IS NOW HOLE!

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K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 2/16/2010 3:18:00 PM

we all stray out of our minds,each time we create lines.tight one,Simmy!

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/10/2010 6:04:00 AM

this is a nice and uplifting poem although i have to say i think my problem is that i never leave my mind =) nice one

Bryan Bolton

Date: 12/18/2009 6:28:00 AM

I like this thanks for referring me to it

Ken O Leary

Date: 12/17/2009 11:43:00 AM

great words,i do love ryming poems,easier to understand,thanks for your comments too,i would love to put my poems into a book,i feel i have a lot to write about,but just need a bit more confidents i guess, many thanks ken

Jessica Stepanovsky

Date: 12/17/2009 11:34:00 AM

thanks simone it does help. thanks for caring.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 12/13/2009 1:39:00 PM

Some tiems i believe im out of my mind but thenwe get right back up.i love your tone in this poem<: -Lynette

Billy Thekidster

Date: 11/24/2009 2:06:00 PM

Am I out of my mind? I often thought that I was, but now I'm inclined to think differently because your masterpiece above forced me to look at myself. I truly have been blessed with spiritual wealth. Great work Simone. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2009 9:46:00 AM

Great write, Simone, perfectly unified in your thoughts and word patterns... luv it.. and much truth also... thankxxx for this great poem from your pen... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Christine Fallas

Date: 11/22/2009 7:41:00 AM

Very Powerful, & thank U for the nice comment u made about Did you, CF

James Fraser

Date: 11/11/2009 1:01:00 PM

Kool poem Simone, thank you for sharing and your kind comments on my poems >> James