Are You Out of Your Mind

Are you out of your mind

Not happy with your lot

Are you out of your mind

Are all your dreams forgot

Do you think you are good for nothing

And there is nothing you can do

Well get back in your mind

Cause I have got news for you

This is your life, it's you who creates

get back in your mind

It's never too late

When you are back in your mind

You have total control

Of every direction, you want to go

When you are back in your mind

You can have all you dream

So get back in your mind

Give those cobwebs a clean

Now you are back, your thoughts will transpire 

If you act on those thoughts

You will have all you desire

This is your life, give it your best shot

Do not be lazy, live your dreams, have the lot

So get back in your mind,Take total control 

Go live your dreams

YOUR MIND IS NOW HOLE!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 2/16/2010 3:18:00 PM
we all stray out of our minds,each time we create lines.tight one,Simmy!
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Date: 2/10/2010 6:04:00 AM
this is a nice and uplifting poem although i have to say i think my problem is that i never leave my mind =) nice one
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Date: 12/18/2009 6:28:00 AM
I like this thanks for referring me to it
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Date: 12/17/2009 11:43:00 AM
great words,i do love ryming poems,easier to understand,thanks for your comments too,i would love to put my poems into a book,i feel i have a lot to write about,but just need a bit more confidents i guess, many thanks ken
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Date: 12/17/2009 11:34:00 AM
thanks simone it does help. thanks for caring.
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Date: 12/13/2009 1:39:00 PM
Some tiems i believe im out of my mind but thenwe get right back up.i love your tone in this poem<: -Lynette
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Date: 11/24/2009 2:06:00 PM
Am I out of my mind? I often thought that I was, but now I'm inclined to think differently because your masterpiece above forced me to look at myself. I truly have been blessed with spiritual wealth. Great work Simone. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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Date: 11/23/2009 9:46:00 AM
Great write, Simone, perfectly unified in your thoughts and word patterns... luv it.. and much truth also... thankxxx for this great poem from your pen... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/22/2009 7:41:00 AM
Very Powerful, & thank U for the nice comment u made about Did you, CF
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Date: 11/11/2009 1:01:00 PM
Kool poem Simone, thank you for sharing and your kind comments on my poems >> James
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