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Anxieties wake us up when we are in affliction. We will track down a creative wellspring of motivation. Obsolete ideas have flourished in objection. Is it true that we back to the hermit turtle? Rejection. Because of this paradox, our minds have stalled. The truth and wonder of life itself are fancied. We mutilate the magnet field to be hindered, to act dishonestly, dear ravisher jumbled. The preliminary went further than our expected hopes. At first, we knew about our focus shifts and goals. We were furrowed to clean and dissipated as realizes. The ambivalence arises from the rivalry always. Intelligible attention to uncovering last movement trance, To yield aid and backing to handle away extravagance. A fresh start to restore faith and sense general enhance. No one has the ways to fulfill one's need for obedience. Which allows for further graceful independence. We have lost everything that made us at peace. While being extracted by fire and photos of reminiscence. The absence of human agony illustrates perchance. Our spirits need all those complex rituals to redeem. Do with careful expulsion to disintegrate the debased dream. And bestow the blessing of unhindered wisdom. As we progress in serenity, we retreat from a problem. This has nothing to do with any other person's perception. But, It helps to revive the implicit flame of passion. A vision of a tear, once again, saves a lost creation. A positive outcome permits understanding the resolution. At last, fresh and neglected facts facilitate the retry. While it appears to be that enhancements were lengthy, The status consistently turns into absoluteness, genuinely Coasting tranquility and freely, at that point consistently. The unexpected impediment fills as one's template. On earth, we are doing our walks, as well as communicate. The earth is moving, however, holding an enigmatic aspect. To sustain and become much further fortunate. Written April 12, 2021 Where are we headed Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 4/13/2021 5:04:00 PM
Very wise, I really like the line 'A positive outcome permits understanding the resolution' - best wishes for the contest~
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Date: 4/13/2021 5:56:00 PM
Thanks Michelle, you’re kind words are so motivating, have a blessed evening, best regards and warm hugs//Las