Are We There Yet

Am I there yet?
Curved shoulders
As a turtle
Carrying home on 
Back
Are you there yet?
Collapsing from
Pressure
Like crying?
No
Sobbing requires 
Intake of breath
Are we

Done before begun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 9, 2012 at 12:09 PM
Rosie I like it..David
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