Are We In Control

Is it I who makes a choice?
Do I create spontaneous thought?
Who is our inner voice?
Was our mind already bought?

What if we are controlled?
At the mercy of a saint or demon.
What if our destiny is already sold?
If so, we have no freedom.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Hello Ronald Thompson, this poem you have created,makes want to ponder these words. have a nice evening my friend. x have a nice evening my friend.
Thompson Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 4:28 AM
If my poem makes you ponder then I am pleased. Thanks for the comment. Have a great day xx
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