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Going Under Is Not The Way......Over!

You promised again.. That you're a new man 'Things would be different This time You said...for sure You're over her You're gonna have some fun Tonight We went to a club Her name came up That's when it all Hit the fan Now you're getting paler Drunk as a sailor Is this a part Of the plan Chorus: Are we having fun yet Is this painting the town red Isn't that what you said A six pack ago Shouldn't we be laughing loud Instead of you passing out Are things looking up now Down here on the floor I think you need help You don't look well Rolling around... By the bar You're here for the night You ain't gonna drive I doubt if you can... Find the car I must admit... When I see you like this I think you're not... Very smart But hey, what do I know I go where you go After all..... I'm your heart! Are we having fun yet Is this painting the town red Isn't that what you said A six pack ago Shouldn't we be laughing loud Instead of you passing out Are things looking up now Down here on the floor!! Protected by copyright Collab with Matt Rossi

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Date: 1/2/2020 7:46:00 PM
The flow is awesome Chuck! And I like the twist of who the narrator is :) I had a similar one with my mind speaking to my heart but only a few people got it. So I took it down. Great write guys!
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 8/10/2021 5:00:00 PM
Thank you Dear Flo! Can you write a poem about Late?
Date: 5/20/2019 2:55:00 PM
Excellent rhythm and flow as always..a fun story as well..so close to real life.. your talent shows!
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 8/10/2021 4:58:00 PM
Thanks VJ.......# years 2 late.....I Owe You!!! and Flo!!!