Are We But Puppets

Are We But Puppets?


Are we but puppets,
residents of some alien ant farm,
playthings of some cosmic giant’s child,
black flies in the eyes of armless men?

Could we be more, or less
than we are?
Dare we challenge our station in life,
buck the system of caste and outcast?
Who will remember us?
Not us, but us
the whole of who and what we are
or tried to be?

Are we more than the blade of grass
less than the rising sun
kinder than the stinging gale
more harsh than sprinkling rain?

Will our time be marked
a ledger entry debit/credit
a question-less
pass/fail test?

A tally of our worth
or lack thereof
a tacit tabulation
scanning life
death to birth.

Are we,
or are we not,
worthy.


John G. Lawless
6/9/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/2/2014 2:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your John
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John Lawless
Date: 12/3/2014 10:41:00 PM
Thanks Brenda
Date: 11/30/2014 10:39:00 AM
incredible imagery John - very deep write - I would hate to think who is pulling my strings - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 12/3/2014 10:40:00 PM
Thanks Jan, for your continued support and input.
Date: 11/30/2014 1:01:00 AM
JOHN, Congratulations, thank you for the support. ~SKAT~
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John Lawless
Date: 12/3/2014 10:39:00 PM
Always a pleasure to enter a contest you sponsor.
Date: 6/17/2014 12:02:00 PM
a daring write so powerfully scribed... there is hope that we will be in control of our fate and be worthy of a good life.. fantastic, john.. huggs
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John Lawless
Date: 12/4/2014 7:45:00 AM
Thank you Nette for your kind words. Sorry to be so long in recognizing your comment it must have slipped through one of those proverbial "cracks". Always appreciate your input.
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