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Are We Awake

are we awake when the tumbler falls in as at the moment of flicker between waking and sleeping state that conscious in lucid dreams we refine our responses fast tracking ascent

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Sand Blown

Date: 8/15/2023 5:27:00 PM

...'are we awake...at the moment....we refine or ascent'.......good one....stan

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/15/2023 6:13:00 PM

thanks, sand

Ink Empress

Date: 8/15/2023 12:28:00 PM

Wow this is beautiful! I love that title and opening line and the creative way you’ve phrased and arranged lines. I especially love the mention of lucid dreams! Deep write and so profound

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/15/2023 6:13:00 PM

happy you enjoyed, IE

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 8/15/2023 8:42:00 AM

In between a dream and full awareness, we often feel a bit confused. At least I do, these days more than ever.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/15/2023 6:12:00 PM

waking up from dreams within dreams, how do we affirm waking state as not yet another dream?