Are We Awake

are we awake when the tumbler falls in as at the moment of flicker between waking and sleeping state that conscious in lucid dreams we refine our responses fast tracking ascent
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Blown Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 5:27 PM
...'are we awake...at the moment....we refine or ascent'.......good one....stan
Seeker Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 6:13 PM
thanks, sand
Empress Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 12:28 PM
Wow this is beautiful! I love that title and opening line and the creative way you’ve phrased and arranged lines. I especially love the mention of lucid dreams! Deep write and so profound
Seeker Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 6:13 PM
happy you enjoyed, IE
Buhagiar Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 8:42 AM
In between a dream and full awareness, we often feel a bit confused. At least I do, these days more than ever.
Seeker Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 6:12 PM
waking up from dreams within dreams, how do we affirm waking state as not yet another dream?
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