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Arduous Delights

She felt utterly drenched in his intoxicating poetry whetted her insatiable hunger for allegories' drunken semblances, quenched an arid thirst parched of reality, as she fully indulged a 'roused appetite amidst gratifying brandied fruits & abundantly aromatic spice of his arduous delights

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Date: 11/9/2016 9:30:00 AM
Poetry and sensual intoxication...a delightful combination which undoubtedly quenches hunger and thirst! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 11/4/2016 6:41:00 PM
A romantic nostalgia perfumed with a sweetly naive passion for invincible love lingers with such a delicate sadness in this lovely poem Paloma...J.A.B.
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Date: 11/4/2016 8:08:00 AM
So soft and sensual are your words today Paloma. "She felt utterly drenched in his intoxicating poetry" Sigh, I feel as if I have entered a dream-state every time I read lines like this. Absolutely beautiful and yes, poetry feels just like that.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/4/2016 11:21:00 AM
Many thanks for your always attentive and encouraging comments Chris.
Date: 11/4/2016 8:06:00 AM
The benefactor of these words is probably enjoying a cigarette. Outstanding;0)
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Paloma P
Date: 11/4/2016 11:20:00 AM
Laughing here, I could be bad for someone's health eh? ;) Thanks Richard.
Date: 11/4/2016 7:43:00 AM
Poetry can be very intoxicating at times, but it is extremely intoxicating when the poet is a beautiful woman from NY, Paloma:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/4/2016 8:39:00 PM
Dah!!
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Paloma P
Date: 11/4/2016 11:19:00 AM
You're gonna make me blush Danny. ;) Thanks so much.
Date: 11/4/2016 7:32:00 AM
Wow Paloma this is a beautiful passionate sensual write - may we be continued to be intoxicated by poetry for many many years:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Paloma P
Date: 11/4/2016 11:18:00 AM
Amen to that Jan! :) Merci.
Date: 11/4/2016 7:31:00 AM
Tasty pen=work Paloma.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/4/2016 11:18:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed Phil. Thank you.

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