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Ardent Skies

Puffed pearlescent clouds, Upon vast romantic skies: Rustic ambiance.

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Abe Lopez

Date: 9/7/2009 6:47:00 PM

pearlescent skies , what a way with words... very nice!

Cesar Cantu

Date: 9/7/2009 6:20:00 PM

Ambiance..that's a tasty word; I feel kind of hungry now jojojo thanks for the experience =D

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/6/2009 1:05:00 PM

passionate skies,pearlescent clouds upon roamntic skies...rustic charm of affection..i love this Haiku--well done-Charma

P Sheart

Date: 9/5/2009 4:17:00 PM

Hi Raul Wow! A beautiful vision you paint with words. I just love the ambiance of this outstanding Haiku! You are quite the talent! Thanks for your most welcome comments. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/5/2009 1:26:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this haiku! "Pearlescent" is a new one on me. I will have to look it up. Thank you for your your kind words. Yours Matthew Anish

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/5/2009 11:15:00 AM

Oh... I Love That View... MoonBee

Elaine George

Date: 9/5/2009 9:59:00 AM

BEAUTIFUL!!!!! LAINIE PS: Dear Raul, thank you for the warm welcome back to the soup.

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/5/2009 9:38:00 AM

Raul this is an excellent haiku my friend - Great visual you have offered the reader - God Bless, mj

James Peranteau

Date: 9/5/2009 6:48:00 AM

Raul,..this is a beautiful Haiku my friend ! I see the blade of grass protruding from your mouth and your poetic thoughts I feel churning inside of your mind as you regard your blessings Sir! Beautiful poem ! james

Krista Kurth

Date: 9/5/2009 6:39:00 AM

Nice Haiku Raul. I've never thought of skies as ardent before reading your poem. Now I know that when my husband and I stood outside last night to gaze at the full moon we were also looking at an ardent sky! Krista

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/5/2009 4:48:00 AM

love the alliteration in line one!..jim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2009 4:03:00 AM

Nicely written Haiku. Sara

Jared Pickett

Date: 9/5/2009 2:28:00 AM

Sets the ambiance quite well friend....:JP]