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Ardent Skies

Puffed pearlescent clouds,
Upon vast romantic skies:
Rustic ambiance.

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Abe Lopez

September 7, 2009 at 6:47 PM

pearlescent skies , what a way with words... very nice!

Cesar Cantu

September 7, 2009 at 6:20 PM

Ambiance..that's a tasty word; I feel kind of hungry now jojojo thanks for the experience =D

Charmaine Chircop

September 6, 2009 at 1:05 PM

passionate skies,pearlescent clouds upon roamntic skies...rustic charm of affection..i love this Haiku--well done-Charma

P Sheart

September 5, 2009 at 4:17 PM

Hi Raul Wow! A beautiful vision you paint with words. I just love the ambiance of this outstanding Haiku! You are quite the talent! Thanks for your most welcome comments. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Matthew Anish

September 5, 2009 at 1:26 PM

Enjoyed reading this haiku! "Pearlescent" is a new one on me. I will have to look it up. Thank you for your your kind words. Yours Matthew Anish

Moonbee Canady

September 5, 2009 at 11:15 AM

Oh... I Love That View... MoonBee

Elaine George

September 5, 2009 at 9:59 AM

BEAUTIFUL!!!!! LAINIE PS: Dear Raul, thank you for the warm welcome back to the soup.

Michael Jordan

September 5, 2009 at 9:38 AM

Raul this is an excellent haiku my friend - Great visual you have offered the reader - God Bless, mj

James Peranteau

September 5, 2009 at 6:48 AM

Raul,..this is a beautiful Haiku my friend ! I see the blade of grass protruding from your mouth and your poetic thoughts I feel churning inside of your mind as you regard your blessings Sir! Beautiful poem ! james

Krista Kurth

September 5, 2009 at 6:39 AM

Nice Haiku Raul. I've never thought of skies as ardent before reading your poem. Now I know that when my husband and I stood outside last night to gaze at the full moon we were also looking at an ardent sky! Krista