Ardent Red

You cannot let go, cannot forget
Everything in the night
However easy it may seem 
Smother a star and stay beneath the eyelids 
Smother too the bitter moon with a cloud
Ardent red, colour my silence 
Ardent red, on a smile that died
Ardent red, to hide my pain
In the night I lose myself 
With the night I forgive you
I hide you beneath the ribs that hurt 
With the bitter moon
When everything I desire is ardent red
I don’t want to lose you to the world outside
Remain unchanged- unquenchable red
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 8:07 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 10:37 AM
DEEP WRITE. LINDA
A  Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 2:21 PM
epic write Luci, you are an excellent poet. SKAT
Fraser Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 4:19 AM
Deep write Luci, very interesting>>James
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