Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Ardent Kisses

Into an endless night utmost faith rings ever true
where ardent kisses live low under a paper moon
hearts stop and linger in unforeseen beauty of being
with anxious arms holding on to every loving beat

This is where I'll rest til our tomorrow's finally cease
this is where I'll be  forever feeling young 
alive in the crimson creases of your petals
enamored by a mere splendor of your sight 

Floating away in a celestial ambrosia breeze
a pearlescent cloud taking the shape of love
a fragrant flower arising under the maple tree
no rush needed  letting undue burdens fall free

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Edward Mccall January 3, 2017 at 11:12 PM Tim what a beautiful and romantic piece. The last four lines really seal it. Well done sir.

Doug Vinson December 27, 2016 at 11:45 AM Such great lines, Tim, and such a pleasure to read.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 27, 2016 at 7:01 AM - A poem with romantic and sensitive lines, beautiful Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus December 27, 2016 at 4:38 AM Love such as this will stay forever young...feels so tender in the crimson creases of her petals! ~ Regards // paul

Charmaine Chircop December 27, 2016 at 12:43 AM Oh like sips of ambrosia so sweet are these enticing words.One of your most romantic poems Tim.Well done.A fave.

Daniel Turner December 26, 2016 at 5:35 PM Sounds like a place I would like to be also, Tim. Very romantic write!

Jan Allison December 26, 2016 at 3:50 PM such beautiful gentle romantic imagery Tim:-) a joy to read :-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green December 26, 2016 at 3:35 PM Softly beautiful and alluring Tim. No need to rush, just take is slow and enjoy every moment.