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Ardent Kisses

Into an endless night utmost faith rings ever true where ardent kisses live low under a paper moon hearts stop and linger in unforeseen beauty of being with anxious arms holding on to every loving beat This is where I'll rest til our tomorrow's finally cease this is where I'll be forever feeling young alive in the crimson creases of your petals enamored by a mere splendor of your sight Floating away in a celestial ambrosia breeze a pearlescent cloud taking the shape of love a fragrant flower arising under the maple tree no rush needed letting undue burdens fall free

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Date: 1/3/2017 11:12:00 PM
Tim what a beautiful and romantic piece. The last four lines really seal it. Well done sir.
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Date: 12/27/2016 11:45:00 AM
Such great lines, Tim, and such a pleasure to read.
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Date: 12/27/2016 7:01:00 AM
- A poem with romantic and sensitive lines, beautiful Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/27/2016 4:38:00 AM
Love such as this will stay forever young...feels so tender in the crimson creases of her petals! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 12/27/2016 12:43:00 AM
Oh like sips of ambrosia so sweet are these enticing words.One of your most romantic poems Tim.Well done.A fave.
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Date: 12/26/2016 5:35:00 PM
Sounds like a place I would like to be also, Tim. Very romantic write!
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Date: 12/26/2016 3:50:00 PM
such beautiful gentle romantic imagery Tim:-) a joy to read :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/26/2016 3:35:00 PM
Softly beautiful and alluring Tim. No need to rush, just take is slow and enjoy every moment.
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