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Archaic Like Spindles

old bookshelves dwindle one page holds all ~ big swindle new hardback kindle Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann Bookshop Poetry Contest 10/3/2021 Syllable counter PS 5/7/5

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/25/2021 5:39:00 PM

Ha David - loved this! :) Linda

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/26/2021 12:32:00 AM

Heya Linda, I’m a book person myself, kindles just don’t float my boat, I feel like it cheapens the story I’m reading if that makes sense cheers David

Greg Gaul

Date: 3/18/2021 6:29:00 AM

This is clever and deep. Lotsa layers. Congrats on your win. Kudos.

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/18/2021 6:55:00 AM

Heya Greg, thank you so much for looking in, I was delighted to get in the frame, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/18/2021 5:24:00 AM

Clever! Congratulations, David! It is a sad thing!

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/18/2021 6:01:00 AM

Heya Kim, thank you so much, I’m delighted with the placement, sad indeed, progress eh, cheers David

Gary Radice

Date: 3/18/2021 2:39:00 AM

Yes, agree with Kai. This is excellent David. Looking forward to the follow up when the Recycling Centres of this world become overwhelmed with used and out of date Kindles..books will make a comeback I'm sure. That's my dream anyway. I think books have had a resurgence of sorts during lockdown. Cheers - Gary

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/18/2021 5:08:00 AM

Indeed Gary, the kindle graveyard, or scrap heap sounds good, maybe we’re just old school, books have made a comeback, but I think the heady days are gone, glad you enjoyed my piece of satire, cheers David

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/18/2021 2:15:00 AM

Brilliant, poignant and biting. A short and wonderful treasure. Kind wishes, Kai

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/18/2021 5:02:00 AM

Thank you Kai, I’m delighted with your placement and even happier you totally get where I’m coming from, cheers David

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/10/2021 10:43:00 AM

smooth suave poem!

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/10/2021 11:02:00 AM

Thanks Caren me likes the feel and smell of books, cheers David