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dry twig snaps beneath my feet~ solemn punctuation in this vaulted nave of oak and cedars. the canopy exhales: My hollowed trunk shelters nesting wrens, my frost-etched rings remember drought, my roots taste the buried stream's cool pulse. I tilt my head—a supplicant— as bark breathes against my palm. the oldest oak leans close whispering: Child, stillness is the first consonant.
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Gauthier Avatar
December 4, 2025 at 8:34 PM
Lovely poem ~ I love trees and forests ~
Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2025 at 4:03 AM
I walked with you along the trail as I can no longer walk like I once did. Yes, God told us to be still and know. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:09 PM
I always feel as if I'm in God's presence when I walk through the nearby woods....thanks for visiting, Sara K, hugs, Sara B
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2025 at 3:36 AM
Ooh…loved that punctuation at the snapping of twigs, and the bark breathing across your palm…I’m exhaling, breathless…love my trees! And a fave!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:08 PM
we both share an affinity for trees....ever since childhood. Thanks for the fave...humbly grateful, hugs, Sara
Poet Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 9:13 AM
This poem presents a clear, vivid imagery of an ancient oak tree, capturing the essence of the natural world and the passage of time. It effectively uses descriptive language and personification to create a strong connection with the reader. Great poem.
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November 19, 2025 at 9:17 AM
thank you, dear Sotto, for the poetic accolades. I've always enjoyed just being in the presence of trees....they awe me! Appreciate your visit today, Texas Hugs, Sara
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