Arboreal

arboreal bird
seeks out the dead....
lightning killed great oak

deathhaiku

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Howard Kerr

February 13, 2026 at 1:43 AM

An impressive Haiku deserving every accolade, Sara. The connectivity betwewn each word is its most salient feature. Thank you for review of Vapour Trail Mirage. Much appreciated, Howard

Sara Kendrick

February 13, 2026 at 5:04 AM

Howard, somedays I am connected and somedays totally disjointed. LOL..Your visit a delight. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

July 9, 2023 at 9:47 PM

Sara great imagination. Just loved it.

Sara Kendrick

July 10, 2023 at 2:46 AM

Thank you, Victor. I appreciate the loved it. Sara

Sotto Poet

July 9, 2023 at 8:00 PM

Sara, your poem is a captivating piece of art, adorned with exquisite imagery.

Sara Kendrick

July 10, 2023 at 2:45 AM

Well, the vultures in life have their reason for being a part of this good earth. You have done a good job finding something nice to say about the birds of death. Sara