Arbeit Macht Frei

The first weakening of night 
picks out telephone lines, 
black against sky. 

The eyelid of a garage door 
lurches laboriously up. 
A car coughs blue breath. 

With aerosols and plastic scrapers 
clandestine delights of frostwebs 
are raked to chemical sludge. 

Starter motors whine. 
Windshields cloud with pain. 
Gears grind teeth. 

An electric train 
gingerly 
utters inarticulate from the sheds, 
groaning over cold joints. 
Thinking grimly 
of tunnels ahead, 
it flares with ill-humor 
crossing the points. 

On unworked land beside the track, 
a fox is heading home. 
Gliding through 
beneath the "keep out" sign, 
he grins at the engine, 
which just judders along, 
headlights trained 
on parallel lines 
which glint ahead, 
reflecting lurid signal red, 
extending out, but never meeting, 
towards the vanishing point.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 6:39 PM
Dear Michael, your astounding poetry is not only rich with intellect, well turned phrases and cultural references but it also showcases the creative energy of you stunning poetic pen. As I read your exceptional poem, every stanza, every line draws a “wow!” from me. I adore the poem, indeed, we are but slaves to the economic machine and your title has a double edge that cuts through the consciousness to the core. A fav! Congratulations for your success in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Coy Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 2:44 AM
Such eloquence, such generosity - it's not often that I'm speechless, but your review leaves me fumbling for words. A humble 'thank you'. Michael
Curtis Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 2:13 PM
Michael This Is Great, I was stationed in Germany in the seventies, scares were still fresh ! I made many friends, very enduring people
Coy Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 2:23 PM
As always, Jerry, I'm very grateful. I'd love to sit you down with a beer and ask you about your experiences.
Godwin Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 11:00 PM
You did it again and again, I am thrilled for you. As a poet, I find much to appreciate about this poem. Silly as it may sound, it strikes me as a man's poem (can I be arrested for saying such in 2025?). That is my true reaction because focus is on things I've known many/mostly guys to focus on. The last stanza talks more about the car than fox who enters poem to cleverly provide further emphasize on the unalive wires, motors, gears, scrapers, etc. living in the night. From start to finish, I heard a lonely train whistle in the night. I get it/got it my way. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Coy Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 1:06 AM
Another great review, for which I thank you. And is it really such a terrible thing to say that many men, like many women, share certain interests and concerns? I think not. (Well done for getting the rebel, flesh-and-blood, fox who hunts at night and laughs at the machines).
Coy Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 12:25 AM
The poem, as you have no doubt gathered, is anti-work. We are slaves to the workaday calendar. The title is German: is stood over the entrance to Auschwitz, and it reads, "work sets you free".
Godwin Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 11:23 PM
Michael, you replied while I was revising. I never had that happened. Wonder which version you read? Pls read once more to see where I landed! Hey, what does the title mean?
Coy Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 11:12 PM
CayCay, I wouldn't dream of erasing a single word! I love receiving your generous messages. And yes, it's a little disappointing that people don't communicate much. You're very modest: you praise me, but you're whipping my hide! Warm regards, Michael
Toney Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 3:04 PM
Michael, this is a chilling critique of our lives. Your title was on the gates of the Nazi concentration camps, “Work sets you free.” We know how that turned out. Likewise, your poem has starter motors whining, gears grinding their teeth, and trains groaning. The fox’s gliding action and grin are brilliant, and the vanishing point at the end is haunting. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 13 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 14 has already started.
Coy Avatar
September 3, 2025 at 3:14 PM
I have to say, Mark, you really 'get' me. It's fab. When this is all over, I'm going to work my way through your PS poems. You're clearly a 'clued-up' dude! Thanks, Michael
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