AR

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AR is scientific abbreviation for Atmospheric River.

clouds carry river
rains flood and destruct on earth
land deluged in pain

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2024 1:19:00 PM

oh that last line is so powerful. Also I like how you used similarly sounding words rains and pain

Bill Baker

Date: 2/6/2024 9:49:00 PM

You packed a lot into these three short lines, my friend. A fine Haiku, Jay. Have a pleasant evening. Bill

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/6/2024 11:26:00 AM

Rains, clouds, floods are devastating California and west. Images expertly conveyed, Jay.

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/6/2024 11:08:00 AM

A splendid Haiku! Jay I thoroughly admire your poem, it is truly extraordinary. The imagery you have created is particularly captivating.