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AR is scientific abbreviation for Atmospheric River.

AR

clouds carry river
rains flood and destruct on earth
land deluged in pain
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Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 1:19 PM
oh that last line is so powerful. Also I like how you used similarly sounding words rains and pain
Baker Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 9:49 PM
You packed a lot into these three short lines, my friend. A fine Haiku, Jay. Have a pleasant evening. Bill
Pandit Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 11:26 AM
Rains, clouds, floods are devastating California and west. Images expertly conveyed, Jay.
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February 6, 2024 at 11:08 AM
A splendid Haiku! Jay I thoroughly admire your poem, it is truly extraordinary. The imagery you have created is particularly captivating.
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