AR

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AR is scientific abbreviation for Atmospheric River.

clouds carry river rains flood and destruct on earth land deluged in pain

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2024 1:19:00 PM

oh that last line is so powerful. Also I like how you used similarly sounding words rains and pain

Bill Baker

Date: 2/6/2024 9:49:00 PM

You packed a lot into these three short lines, my friend. A fine Haiku, Jay. Have a pleasant evening. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/6/2024 4:59:00 PM

a captivating read with a hidden dual meaning in the last line. Not only do floods destroy earth creating destruction and pain to Mother earth, our country is deluged in pain right now, suffering from the flood of evil and divisiveness I see...just my mind wandering as I read your outstanding Haiku. Well done...am faving...have a great evening, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/6/2024 11:26:00 AM

Rains, clouds, floods are devastating California and west. Images expertly conveyed, Jay.

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/6/2024 11:08:00 AM

A splendid Haiku! Jay I thoroughly admire your poem, it is truly extraordinary. The imagery you have created is particularly captivating.