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Aquatic Astronauts

AQUATIC ASTRONAUTS beneath blue depths they train it feels a lot like home no gravity you see moon shine and ripples floating bloated bodies and airtight head gear of steel here they speak universal truths vernacular bubbles in claustrophobic booths delusional dialogue hydra hallucination days of depraved youths brains strain blended in bends above harsh daylight hammers pound buried under static gales where sanity is lost and found dispersed authenticity drowns whilst spoken universal truths rest calm in underwater booths transcending tranquil peace resounds (Astronauts train underwater) © Kim van Breda—23 February 2015

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Date: 5/12/2015 2:59:00 PM
- Kim, welcome back - nice to see you! - As always a pleasure to read your poetry - Hope all is well with you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 5/12/2015 3:37:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise.. looking forward to reading some of your latest poems after such a lengthy absence. All well.. just been busy publishing poetry book collections... love as always xx

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