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Aquarius - of Course

I am 
Aquarius
We, ahead of our time
                 so I am told

Thinkers
Listless, obsessed
'Till all is perfected
                         so I am told.



Amy Green
4/20/2014
Aquarius, of course
For the THREADS OF SYLLABLES contest

Copyright © Amy Green | Year Posted 2014

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/24/2014 4:05:00 AM Unique take on this one,,,beautiful poem n a merited win Amy ! congrats! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/23/2014 10:41:00 PM Nice take on the theme of thread. Congrats on a fine win, Amy Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 4/23/2014 7:06:00 PM Stopping back with a congratulatory hug!! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/23/2014 11:44:00 AM i like this for its poetic integrity, amy... sweet cheers on your win in my contest.. huggs Login to Reply

Verlena S. Walker Date: 4/23/2014 10:26:00 AM Nice Amy... Congratulations on winning in the contest... Verlena Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/20/2014 3:41:00 PM I really like how you used the name of the form as your theme. So cool that you are Aquarius. The peace lovers!! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 4/20/2014 2:22:00 PM Oh heck I'm Aquarius too! I need to check out the almond brownies and ginger flapjacks I made today see if they are perfect - may have to eat them all just to be certain lol hugs Jan Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 4/20/2014 10:25:00 AM Ah the genius of the Aquarius has come out again ....lol Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 4/20/2014 7:16:00 AM So I'm told... too .... me being another Aquarius! Like this read, but I think Dave is correct. // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 4/23/2014 11:56:00 AM Back again.....congratulations!!:) // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/20/2014 4:41:00 AM Nice take, quite to the point, Amy Login to Reply