Kim Rodrigues Poet Tanka

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Aqua Therapy

 

the pool’s push and pull

breaststroke or hugging a tree

the weights and noodles

back and forth I tread bare feet

simple sciatica cure

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Aqua Therapy-Hiku Tanka

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t   he pool’s push   l   X  l         and                pul    l
b  reaststroke or    l   X  l      hugging a         tre     e
t   he weights and  l   X  l                        noodle     s
b  ack and forth     l   X  l     I tread bare        fee    t
s  imple sciatica     l   X  l                              cur    e
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Oliver Mckeithan June 9, 2025 at 1:13 AM Good one Kim. Sounds like it is doing you good. Hope you continue. Kim Rodrigues June 9, 2025 at 3:09 AM Me too! Thank you, Oliver!

Hilda Greenhough June 8, 2025 at 6:31 PM It sounds good and maybe even a little fun. Best of luck Kim Rodrigues June 8, 2025 at 8:24 PM Yes! The epidural helped the most but the therapy made me stronger. Trying water aerobics tomorrow. We will see.

Paige Hind June 8, 2025 at 5:17 PM I hope it's a cure for your pain, dear Kim. You just write about everything, lol. <3 TLC! Paige Hind June 8, 2025 at 9:13 PM Why not! <3 :) Kim Rodrigues June 8, 2025 at 8:23 PM I do! Why not? Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2025 at 2:12 PM Congrats, Kim. I used to swim a lot in my time. Aqua aerobics are so good for the body. Kim Rodrigues June 8, 2025 at 3:52 PM Getting into it tomorrow. Finished therapy last week. Hugs

Bernardo F. Asuncion June 8, 2025 at 1:23 AM Very impressive..Congrats. Kim Rodrigues June 8, 2025 at 5:24 AM Thank you, Bernard! :)

Krishnanand Guptar June 8, 2025 at 12:25 AM Congratulations friend on your top win with a thoughtful creative piece. Wish you a cheerful day. Kim Rodrigues June 8, 2025 at 5:24 AM Thank you, Krishnanand!

JC Brul June 7, 2025 at 11:26 PM Wow, so creative! Congratulations, Kim! Kim Rodrigues June 8, 2025 at 5:26 AM Thank you, JCB!

Maclawrence Famuyiwa June 7, 2025 at 10:42 PM Cooly innovative. Congrats. Kim Rodrigues June 8, 2025 at 5:26 AM Thank you, Maclawrence!

Gershon Wolf June 7, 2025 at 9:44 PM Your tankas always amaze me, Kim. This one is no exception --- 'Hugging a Tree' blew my lid off... Thanks, gw Kim Rodrigues June 8, 2025 at 5:27 AM LOL! Thank you :)