Notes About The Poem

Aptly Conveying Thoughts

With pen in hand I sat, clearly I could visualize
the graphic scene I intended my readers to see.
Each detail was so vivid when I closed my eyes;
a child, happily singing beneath a dogwood tree.

Trying to write the words, my breath was shallow.
How could I describe the curled edges of a leaf.
or the color of soil in the field beyond, left fallow?
How was I to aptly convey Spring in poetic motif?

My pulse quickened as I filled my pen with ink
Images were copied from my mind to stationery.
Blue skies came alive; leaves were fringed in pink
Verses flowed freely; I dared not dawdle or tarry.

There was nothing ambiguous in what I had penned
Expressed realistically, the child's voice could be heard.
Through imagery, a poet has the ability to transcend
readers into each verse when the imagination is spurred.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Empress Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 10:06 AM
Ah as always linnersz, youv expressed beautifully in a way that made me pause and just be in awe of how artistic you are! If anyone could describe any season it would be the ink of an artistic soul ~ you! I absolutely love and felt the lines “ How could I describe the curled edges of a leaf. or the color of soil in the field beyond, left fallow? How was I to aptly convey Spring in poetic motif?l so evocative and stunning’ soulful write really! Absolutely loved reading this one! Sendinf you light
Lane Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 10:36 AM
Hi Ink and thanks for your always gracious words that express your innermost thoughts. Our friendship has grown to a point over the last year or so that we know exactly that our emotions are triggered by the same words, thoughts, pictures... whatever gives us pause to write. Merci, sweet friend.
Empress Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 10:06 AM
Fave ofcourze too!
Lane Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 10:36 AM
Merci beaucoup
Beaufort Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 4:32 PM
Lin, this is a wonderful exploration of a poet's mind...which you exhibit so well. It's a treat to share this kind of insight with this humble audience. Really a present to us all. Thanks and smiles!!!
Lane Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 4:48 PM
Hi, Duke. Your compliments are only exceeded by the smiles you offer. ;-)
Alhemaidy Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 3:31 PM
Interesting rhyme poem about writing!
Lane Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 3:54 PM
The pen writes what the mind sees. Thank you very much, AA.
Godwin Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 2:53 PM
This took my breath away. Have you an inhaler?
Lane Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 3:52 PM
lol CayCay. Just breathe. I’m glad you enjoyed the read. Thank you.
Cunningham Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 12:41 PM
You certainly have a talent for that Lin, painting stunning images with your words. Tom
Lane Avatar
March 31, 2026 at 1:11 PM
Merci, Tom. Your comments are graciously appreciated.
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