April Haiku

shards of rain and hail pounding on the soaking grass... april tempest blows swollen river beds fields of winter turning green... peeking through the mud showers feed the lawns tender shoots that spring up strong... flowers on the way

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Date: 4/3/2011 4:40:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery to paint a picture with words. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/3/2011 8:42:00 AM

Its beautiful here after weeks of rain..I saw "green peeking through the mud.." Enjoyed...BG

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/3/2011 6:14:00 AM

I hope so, you sound like you have had the same Spring begining as I... Lovely images hold your words in this April write...always Michael

Judy Konos

Date: 4/3/2011 6:09:00 AM

Deb, how true this is...Just few days ago golf size hail ripped into homes smashing siding and auto windshields with flooding in all the streets and still no electricity for many! We do look forward to your "Flowers on the way" with much anticipation.....Judy