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April Fools

Was I a fool to love you this beating heart of mine They said you come in April this beating heart of mine With tiny hands and tiny feet a wonder love of life so sweet this beating heart of mine Yet you did not make it this beating heart no more Am I a fool to love you still this beating heart no more

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2016 11:45:00 PM

tracee, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 5/12/2016 8:55:00 AM

Tracee, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/20/2010 2:08:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry today and its creative theme.. hope u will check out the contest scene offered to new members..good luck with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/20/2010 10:19:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tracee. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/20/2010 5:51:00 AM

sad thoughts, well writtten poem!

Nick Bagnall

Date: 10/20/2010 4:42:00 AM

Welcome to poetry soup. I like the rhythm the repeating phrase imparts to the poem, I'm not entirely convince but the sentence structure towards the end. I enjoyed reading you poem, well done