April Fawn

Longing in lowly light of longer days
by which a summer wilts paternal dreams
and browns the loitered heaves of yellow spring:

the budding void that stamps an empty swing
seen swaying golden locks ungated beams
my own Begotten streamed in greener dawn
where fussy forums for an April fawn

allay no muttered march on mother’s May.

Persistent blades unsheathe the sprawling grass
beneath the blue release of silver dew -
an inch overgrown, as inch shrouded cool
billows: arisen reeds from dizzied drool
showing flashes of reincarnation
cured by the rose (or purple carnation)

4/4/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/4/2017 4:02:00 PM
As it was written or posted in April nice!
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Date: 4/29/2017 8:40:00 PM
Great job on this poem. I have enjoyed it. Phillip a 7 for this poem.
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Date: 4/6/2017 9:50:00 PM
I don't think you need to put the label of sonnet on this magnificent piece Phillip. Strictly following the form limits your creativity. I feel as if I can drink this poem in as an elixir of ambrosia! It has a haunting beauty that stirs the soul in poignant pain. I know now who your poetry reminds me of and why I enjoy it so much. It is because your style kind of reminds me of my favorite poet, Lord Byron. Anyone who understands great poetry would praise the genius of this piece. A Fave 7+ ; )
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Date: 4/6/2017 10:18:00 PM
Thank you, Connie, for not spinning another dead poet on my conscience. A few more of those and I worry they might form some sort of society and rise up against me :)
Date: 4/6/2017 10:28:00 AM
This is simply beautiful, and I cansee everything you are painting here with your words, you're a wordsmith.
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