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Approval Gaze

Exposed by Your divine glowing glance My soul melted in carnality’s shame Revealing hypocrisy lurking against guilt… I earnestly repent midst judgment-balance. Caught by Your compassionate look, never hasty My heart yielded to be locked inside Your fortress, love-built Delightfully abiding in Your gracious imprisonment Braced upon mercy and truth’s security. In Your omniscience, I’m kept in Your care Never facing terror of grievous abandonment You valued my being with grand significance… Now, I can vanquish torturous loneliness-scare. With Your approval, sealed by Your favour* My faith, Lord, meets Your gaze of illumining fervour Yielded I am for Your guidance in my endeavour Offering to You my service as oblation of sweet savour.
*Psalm 106:4 Remember me, O LORD, with the favour that thou bearest unto thy people: O visit me with thy salvation. February 25, 2020 3rd place, "STRAND CHOICE B" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 3/10/2020.

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Date: 3/11/2020 1:56:00 PM
Beata, lovely statement of faith encased in your poem. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/10/2020 8:44:00 PM
Beata, congratulations on your placement of you spiritual poem. A lovely read. ~
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Date: 2/25/2020 9:26:00 AM
As your poetry shines the light of truth, this old poet enjoys its immense beauty, wisdom and heart. A fav-- a gem too...
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Date: 2/25/2020 8:31:00 AM
This is a great Love Story, overflowing with gratitude. Well expressed. Blessings Rick. I can see that you are guided by The True North Star.
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