Apples 2

the sweeping violence of reality has teeth
and chews our dreams like gum
then walks around smiling at our weakness
the dreamers
the bastards
the usual losers
I'm watching for the indifference of the universe...
Is the killing of our ideals not enough?
Does the weight of remorse 
need to accompany disappointment?
I'm afraid
the last apples in the basket might be rotten, too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Hankins Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 1:47 PM
Reality will surely label us, Marco. And, I suspect the universe (the cosmos?) is indifferent to our pain. I rather think it doesn't even acknowledge our ideals. Hmmm...I fear the "last apples in the basket [may] be rotten, too." I enjoyed chewing on this, Marco. Keep up the good writing.
Chies Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 2:01 PM
I appreciate your words of wisdom, this poem has a special meaning for me.
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