Apples

Apples Smooth round and regular Bountifully filling orchards with unforbidden fruit A symbol of all that is wholesome and healthy Stability body and mind

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/12/2022 8:38:00 AM

Such a fine description of a Apple Jane, superbly penned with great imagery too. Hope all is good where you are in UK, we're spending a few days break at Southport but go home to Scotland tomorrow. Blessings,Gordon

Jane Ashfield
Date: 5/12/2022 9:27:00 AM

Thank you Gordon. My apple tree is in blossom and looking so lovely right now. I await the fruit! Hope you have enjoyed your break south of the border.

Jeff Kyser

Date: 5/12/2022 3:48:00 AM

I like this, short and sweet, but conjuring nice images. I’m looking forward to the apples from our trees!

Jane Ashfield
Date: 5/12/2022 4:32:00 AM

Thank you - there is something so wholesome and grounding about the fruit. Enjoy your harvest.