Apple Pie

A-appetising
p-pleasant
p-pie
l-likeable
e-eatable

p-pieces
i-ice cream
e-enjoyable
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hodges Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 8:02 PM
I love this poem! Its so simple and sweet! A slice of apple pie with ice cream is always delicious and of course not healthy,but sometimes you got to have it! Awesome right! Forget rating this a 7 this should be a 10!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 2:20 PM
Hello Candance, nice hearing from you.This was a fun poem to write.Oh... I think apple pie is healthy, when a slice of cheese is on the crust.Yum!I alspo like blueberry pie it is my favourite.
Marles Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 2:02 PM
This is delightful Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Thank you Laurura
Callus Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 2:54 PM
Apple pie...one of my favourites, even though I do not go mad on sweets! You tempt me to try out yours, Darlene! Regards // paul
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 9:19 PM
I have my apple pie witha slice of cheese on top.I like it that way.
Muideen Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Beautiful and enjoyable piece..........A.M.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Thank you Afolabi I enjoyed writing this poem.
Scars Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 7:37 AM
very cute Darlene...yummy in my tummy :)-luloo
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Apple pie is my favourite pie to.I enjoy reading your poetry.
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Short and sweet, Darlene!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 8:47 PM
Thank you Andrea I enjoyed writing this poem.
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