Apple Pie

Mmmm! Melt in my mouth
you flaky apple pie.
You're making me drool,
you're making me cry.

Just a taste
on the tip of my tongue.
Hurry up now,
while i'm still young.

I can smell your aroma
From miles away,
Please give me slice
Or here I will stay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 12:43 AM
Nice one, Edward. A belated congrats for you!
Brown Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 7:21 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's Dreamy Desserts contest Edward. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 1:38 PM
Congrats Edward on your HM in my dessert contest .. and for supporting my efforts to make it fun.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
A   Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 9:01 AM
lol i liked this one,, funny. The first stanza was just the cherry on top lol funny and good stuff, good luck on the contest
Mehta Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 8:29 AM
Nice expressions. Good luck if you are in the contest
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