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Apple Orchard

The worm embedded 
deep within the ripe fruits core 
safe from pickers now... 

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Contest: Apples ? Oranges? 
Sponsor; Carol Brown
Submitted by; Judy Konos

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Andrea Dietrich

May 29, 2011 at 1:15 AM

Congratulations on your win, Judy! That worm is sitting pretty in the apple!!

Nette Onclaud

May 28, 2011 at 11:57 PM

cheery congrats on you fine win, judy! woe! :) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 28, 2011 at 8:47 PM

Congrats Judy on a super win in Carol's contest.. another beauty luv. enjoy...

Barbara Gorelick

May 28, 2011 at 8:47 PM

Good thinking..on the worms part and on yours. Well done, and cograts. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 28, 2011 at 4:15 PM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Judy

Gwendolen Song

May 28, 2011 at 2:09 PM

HI JUDY! VERY GLAD TO SEE THIS PLACED...great thots here! Congrats! Gwendolen

Kash Poet

May 28, 2011 at 11:28 AM

Nice approach here.Congrats Judy on your win....

Jack Horne

May 28, 2011 at 11:06 AM

Many congratulations on your win, Judy : )

John Freeman

May 28, 2011 at 6:55 AM

Judy, good to see in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 28, 2011 at 5:59 AM

Congratulations on your placement in my contest Judy. I thank you so much for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 21, 2011 at 5:51 PM

Wonderful entry to the contest with great images, Judy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 21, 2011 at 5:23 PM

interesting and creative aspect Judy on this contest ..good luck luv.. a great Haiku to top the winners chart luv.. the worm is a smart cookie..haha..

Barbara Gorelick

May 21, 2011 at 4:55 PM

Clever one Judy..we had an apple tree when I was young..lots of worms! didnt stop us though...BG

Carolyn Devonshire

May 21, 2011 at 4:26 PM

Oh my, I wouldn't want to take a bite and find only half a worm. LOL Seriously though, this is a very creative senryu and I think it will do well in Carol's contest! Best wishes to you, Judy. Love, Carolyn PS-I am working on an entry for your contest. Entries used to come in faster when there were fewer contests. Have a great weekend!