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Apple Orchard

The worm embedded deep within the ripe fruits core safe from pickers now... *** Contest: Apples ? Oranges? Sponsor; Carol Brown Submitted by; Judy Konos

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Date: 5/29/2011 1:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Judy! That worm is sitting pretty in the apple!!
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Date: 5/28/2011 11:57:00 PM
cheery congrats on you fine win, judy! woe! :) huggs
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Date: 5/28/2011 8:47:00 PM
Congrats Judy on a super win in Carol's contest.. another beauty luv. enjoy...
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Date: 5/28/2011 8:47:00 PM
Good thinking..on the worms part and on yours. Well done, and cograts. BG
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Date: 5/28/2011 4:15:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Judy
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Date: 5/28/2011 2:09:00 PM
HI JUDY! VERY GLAD TO SEE THIS PLACED...great thots here! Congrats! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/28/2011 11:28:00 AM
Nice approach here.Congrats Judy on your win....
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Date: 5/28/2011 11:06:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win, Judy : )
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Date: 5/28/2011 6:55:00 AM
Judy, good to see in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/28/2011 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Judy. I thank you so much for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2011 5:51:00 PM
Wonderful entry to the contest with great images, Judy
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Date: 5/21/2011 5:23:00 PM
interesting and creative aspect Judy on this contest ..good luck luv.. a great Haiku to top the winners chart luv.. the worm is a smart cookie..haha..
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Date: 5/21/2011 4:55:00 PM
Clever one Judy..we had an apple tree when I was young..lots of worms! didnt stop us though...BG
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Date: 5/21/2011 4:26:00 PM
Oh my, I wouldn't want to take a bite and find only half a worm. LOL Seriously though, this is a very creative senryu and I think it will do well in Carol's contest! Best wishes to you, Judy. Love, Carolyn PS-I am working on an entry for your contest. Entries used to come in faster when there were fewer contests. Have a great weekend!
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Date: 5/21/2011 4:07:00 PM
love it, good luck in the contest
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