Apple Once Bitten Desires

Always sweet to the mind 
one bite looking through these eyes 
shades the blossoms scenting 
touching inside deepest cords 

Softest emotions grin 
begin petal smiling warm 
gently in my weakness 
is you love hot burning warm 

Beats drip honey golden 
deep brushing silent fingers 
sweetly touching inside 
pulse dance, flickering hotly 

Unquenchable fire 
through the one keyhole looking 
on petal coloring 
every shade,amber sweeping 

To gold on glass misting 
gem of life you will always 
remain a mystery 
sweet beautiful dream




wrote in 6/7 syllable count
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 8:32 AM
Intriguing but i love every first two lines in each stanza.. :) awesome.. :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 3:08 PM
truly dazzling very beautiful comment olive deep touching thank you dear friend bless you
Chircop Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Love is a mystery when it lives in a dream,once it becomes reality the mystery unvels into a treadure to keep.Beautiful!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 3:05 PM
so very true charmaine smiling it sure is a mystery when the pureness shines happiness and joy will always shine a diamond in the end wonderful comment dear pal heartfelt appreciated bless you
Chircop Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 7:54 AM
treasure i meant : ) oops
Allison Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 3:06 AM
this passionate write flows so well with wonderful imagery I love the form you have used Liam:-) Hugs Jan xx
Mcdaid Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 3:24 AM
thank you jan dear friend its a ripple effect i was trying to draw deep waves in thought misting gem wonderful comment bless you
Smith Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 10:41 PM
To remain a mystery and a dream....the fire will rage on...excellent pen my friend
Mcdaid Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 1:22 AM
love is the most beautiful mystery gift when received tim thank you dear friend for the heart touching beautiful comment bless you
Sibanda Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 9:31 PM
l would say :Great artistry.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 1:19 AM
ah ndaba wonderful comment heartfelt beautiful thank you ever so kindly deeply appreciated
Meade Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 9:27 PM
Dreams and desires work well in this poem, the words heighten this feeling and then drives it home in the last stanza . . . mystery sweet beautiful dream. A big ending . . . leaving me wanting more. Great job.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 1:16 AM
david thank you for the dazzling very beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Nance Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 7:05 PM
That has a real nice flow of passionate words Liam :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 7:09 PM
thank you kindly casarah wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated
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