Apple of My Eye

when you made that hot apple pie
then placed it to cool on the hutch
it was the apple of my eye
and it tasted like it was dutch

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1/20/20
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Laurie Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 4:14 PM
G'day Timothy … never safe to leave such a fine delicacy unguarded - thanks Timothy - Lindsay
Mcguire Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 2:07 AM
You are right Lindsay!
Gauthier Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 1:04 AM
O no~ the aroma is now in my brain... it's going to float around in there until I get a piece.
Mcguire Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 3:26 PM
me too :)
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