Notes About The Poem

Adam and Eve were put in the garden of Eden, they came from egoism and raised to the degree of stolen altruism. Man shall parish as a result of disobeying God’s order not to eat from the tree of life. Man came from dust and shall return to dust —poet

Apple


                                    apple bites the dust 
                                a taste of forbidden fruit~
                        c            d   corruption
                         o   i   l  e

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CayCay Godwin

May 28, 2025 at 2:32 AM

Oh, you snaked, I mean snuck in such a clever line. CayCay

I Am Anaya

May 30, 2025 at 11:56 AM

It's the thought that counts!

Paige Hind

May 26, 2025 at 10:21 PM

....makes me aware of my own fallenness. Wise.

I Am Anaya

May 30, 2025 at 11:55 AM

All are prone to fall, we are forgiven when we forgive ourselves..a little wellness birdie whispered it in my ear ;)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

May 26, 2025 at 8:24 AM

Cute and so pithy!

I Am Anaya

May 26, 2025 at 11:14 AM

Yes, she is cute, it's tough condensing the story of Adam and Eve in 5-7-5 syllables! lol. Ty, my dear AA!

Speaks Volumes

May 26, 2025 at 5:52 AM

Good one ! Luv it, Has to be a winner.

I Am Anaya

May 26, 2025 at 11:13 AM

Ah, Ty SV. maybe not but, if I get a wise message out along the way, and make you smile, then all is Okay ~

Silent One

May 26, 2025 at 3:23 AM

Lovel idea and so creative.... I like how you started the first line - always good to be different..

I Am Anaya

May 26, 2025 at 11:09 AM

SO, there is apple pie, "apple of my eye" The big Apple~ I chose the most profound, biblical symbolism. I wish to teach something along the way if anything poet.