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Appeared Young Laura

Once upon a time in the land of Jack
Appeared young Laura, now fancy that
Such pride and joy
Feel young as a boy
The decades that separate us don't mean a whack


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Kp Nunez

Date: 6/10/2015 9:17:00 AM

Another lovely one for a great poet and lovely friend. Happy to see the friendship flourish! :-). PS. Hope you get some time to visit as well as welcome our new member of the gang, COOLLOVE.

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/10/2015 11:40:00 AM

Who is this mysterious COOLLOVE??? Loving hugs, Jack xxx

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 6/10/2015 3:06:00 AM

I mean ever word I say, Jack. I truly treasure your poetry. The feeling is mutual! You brighten my days, so I must, of course, do the same for you. You are a very special friend of mine, and I am having a BLAST reading your work! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/10/2015 7:29:00 AM

I am so blessed to have the friendship of a young mind such as yours, my dearest Laura! You keep me young! I love you to the moon dear Laura! xxx

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 6/9/2015 9:58:00 PM

Friendship knows no age Jack! Glad your humor is still attracting lretty young poets to inspire you! Lol~Jan

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/10/2015 7:26:00 AM

"Friendship knows no age!" Soooo true! Love those pretty young poets! LOL Love and hugs, Jack xxx

Judy Konos

Date: 6/9/2015 4:18:00 PM

speaking of friends here...go to my poem "A little Corny ish" and leave a Jack Can You Top This Comment. Craig Cornish is dumping us...and we're trying to keep him here...unless you don't know who he is ...then write that too! lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/10/2015 7:24:00 AM

Okay! I did my bit! Who knows what could be going on in his life aside from poetry! Love ya! Jacko xxxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 6/9/2015 2:32:00 PM

I like that 'in the Land of Jack' thing. Dragon's confused. I'd almost got him to understand it's Canada... I think that boat just sailed. He'll never believe me now!... And Grandpa Troll's now laughing and willing to make a bet with me ... that I'll NEVER convince Dragon ever again!

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/10/2015 7:22:00 AM

Laura and I have connected much like you and I!!! Huggsies xxxx

Judy Konos

Date: 6/9/2015 10:40:00 AM

Nope what's a decade when you consider how old the world is. Friendship onward..

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/9/2015 1:38:00 PM

Right on my dear Judy!!! I feel a special bond with this young lady! She's in the process of going back and reviewing a bunch of my older stuff... quite a challenge ahead of her! Not sure her over-the-top praise is all that warranted but it sure does brighten my days!

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/9/2015 1:38:00 PM

You and many others achieve the same thing... the friends I've made here, I will cherish till my very last day!!! Love ya Judy, Hugs, Jack xxx