Appearances

There is a storm Upon the tide To keep good form We have to ride.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

James Fraser

Date: 12/17/2010 2:36:00 AM

Kool message in this shortie Deb >> James :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2010 8:32:00 PM

Good metaphor for keeping up appearances, deb. Reminds me of that old song, riders on the storm.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/8/2010 5:10:00 AM

I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Deb. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love,Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/7/2010 5:25:00 PM

That's a great grook, Deb, filled with wisdom. We succeed when we have a positive attitude. There's no way to totally avoid life's storms, but usually we can find ways to ride them out. Love, Carolyn