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Contest Judged:  4/1/2018 6:49:00 AM

2nd place - Silver Trophy for PoetrySoupers by Artsieladie

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Appear My Queen At the Pier

As the life of the day nears its last breath,
With a glow of crimson, forewarning its death,
Upon its cresting, the reflection, daunting,
The sea sets free a beauty, haunting
The depths of its treasures of unknown span,
The Queen Of Pearls, secluded from man.

This queen, a beauty of figure, a maiden so fair,
With glistening gold locks finer than Pele's hair
And eyes that blend with her homing sea green,
Lips sweeter than honey for a honeycomb's queen,
Once a fortnight, this Queen Of The Sea,
As Mr. Moon swoons, she comes for me.

I wander each eve along the sea's shore,
When near is the time, I long, live for,
Watching intently for the tell tale sign
Of soon again, she will be mine.
Though my patience is tried over many a night,
I know very soon the time will be right.

"Will I see her again; will she come out?"
Puncturing my heart with needles of doubt,
Is fear I'm pained with before each time we meet,
As though and worse than gripped by mesquite.
Then as the tide comes in, over the incoming foam,
For an auspicious clue, my eyes desperately roam.

The sign, the signal, I must not miss
For I can taste so sweet her magical kiss.
My heart couldn't take the grief of such woe,
If I were to become no longer her beau.
The pressure is on, for surrounding me
Is somewhere a message, elusive, a mystery.

Each time the message comes in by way of unique,
For I must earn and prove I'm worthy to seek
This maiden so fair of beauty unsurpassed
And continually I must, if our Love is to last.
Only one common factor am I to ever know;
A pearl will appear, in some way show.

Her signature, a pearl, confirms her request
And one of the finest, only the best.
My Love is not just a queen of the deep sea;
She is the Queen Of Pearls, her royal majesty.
Sometimes I wonder why it is I she chose,
But it's a secret kept, for the sea only knows.

Once a seagull brought and dropped one in the sand,
From the sky above, next to me to on purpose land.
Another time, a sea lion rolled in with the tide
And flipped a pearl to me as he winked with pride.
Yet, another time, I was beckoned out into the sea,
By a whale that spouted a pearl then straight to me.

As my anxiety grows to an unbearable state
And just when I feel I can no longer wait,
With flippers anchored and a look of daring,
In a coat of gold, his mischief, baring,
I knew at once that what I sought
Was now before me with a troubling thought.

For I knew a challenge he had predesigned,
To acquire this pearl would take wit of mind.
Since my heart's condition was at stake,
I had no room for error nor one mistake.
What would be tempting too much for him;
Catch him off guard to forfeit the gem?

Through files of thoughts I ran a quick scan,
Searching to find the one fool proof plan.
Then he made a face at me and straight away
It triggered a thought from a yesterday,
When Andre, the seal, harboured a 'tude,
He stuck out his tongue and blew to be rude.

So, like Andre I leaned in and did the same,
At the seal's face, I took a precise aim.
I stuck out my tongue and blew in his face.
Surprised, he hadn't time to against me, brace.
The temptation too great, he returned the favour
And the pearl became mine only to savour.

Though he was unhappy he had been tricked,
I was elated as my dilemma had been licked.
With all my strength, clenched in my fist
Was my ticket to passion when I was kissed
By my maiden of Love to meet on the pier,
Where soon now I knew she would appear.

As though on wings, my feet did fly
To the pier in waiting where at last, I
Would be joined in Love with my queen,
As soon as she appeared upon the scene.
When I arrived, she was waiting there
To rise out of the sea, my maiden, fair.

As she rose, I pulled her so close to me
And as we locked our lips, she magically
Transformed into a lady, full human form,
Extraordinary and far from norm.
We danced, made Love; laughed and cried,
Baring all of our emotions from inside.

No moment was wasted, no second in time,
In sync we were with both rhythm and rhyme.
But time flies by too quickly it seems,
When you're with the only star of your dreams.
All too soon a new day was being born
And a sun of gold was greeting the morn.

As she stood on the pier elegantly dressed,
All onlookers couldn't have ever guessed
That my lady, my queen, lived in the sea
And transformed back, she soon would be.
As we were saying our sad good-bye,
A flock of witnesses then flew by.

Letting her go each time to return to the deep,
Is harder than the promise to her I made to keep.
Though I'm elated with joy, new memories made,
I must again for a fortnight through longing, wade.
As she slips quietly back into the waiting sea,
My tears like rivers, shower her adoringly.

The returning back to my homing place,
With my tears washing my distraught face,
I clutch the pearl, the precious stone,
And seek only now with myself to be alone.
Since there's nothing better than the best,
I can only look forward to her next request.

I hear a persistent knock upon my door,
As I awaken, for me, someone's looking for.
At first confused, I glanced around,
As again came that knocking sound.
"What a dream of fantasy. Wow!" I thought.
But then a pearl from my dream along I'd brought...

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2018/03/28
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Smith Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 1:13 AM
Such a lovely vivid poem, it is like one is with you watching your love story from the beach, simply beautiful adie Sharon. Hugs Chantelle
Donnelly Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 3:22 AM
Thank you, Chantelle, for your thoughts. Much appreciated. :) hugs ~ Artsie
Gist Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Very picturesque! Nice!
Donnelly Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 3:20 AM
Thank you, J. All the best to you.:) ~ Artsie
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 5:32 PM
Hello artsoe;adie Sharon Donnelly, this is a beautifully written romantic poem. This is how I see this written poem. have a nice day my friend.
Donnelly Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Thank you, Darlene, for your kind words and may you too, have a nice day my friend. :) ~ Artsie
Inman Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 8:48 PM
A wonderful, wonderful write Sharon. Your couplets sang with smooth flow and great rhyme.
Donnelly Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 4:55 AM
Thank you, James. I surprised myself with this one for just a poem became a story. As the story unfolded in my imagination, I became its messenger, its reporter of, so to speak. lol Thanks for reading. All the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
Gauthier Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 9:39 PM
Congrats on your win, Artsieladie. Beautifully done.
Donnelly Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Thank you, Line. :) ~ Artsie
Thomas Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 10:14 AM
What a beautiful fantasy Artsie! Though I've never pictured Pele to have blond hair lol. Of course we could be talking about two different Pele! You have a wonderful imagination! Makes me want to post an old moon fantasy poem of mine. Nani hana (beautiful work) Sharon!
Donnelly Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 3:13 AM
You would love Hawaii I'm sure, Shadow. It is beautiful and better appreciated if you can avoid the droves of tourists. The big island of Hawaii, called Hawaii, where I lived, provides more privacy and seclusion. I hope you are able to go one day. :) ~ Artsie
Thomas Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 10:03 PM
Oh I love how that sounds Artsie! I am of Hawaiian descent though I have never been; my mother is Hawaiian. One day I may actually get to meet my family on the islands. But I do dream about this place that I have never been able to see with my own eyes.
Donnelly Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Thank you, Shadow. The Pele's Hair I refer to is the very fine threads of volcanic glass, formed when lava droplets cool rapidly in the air. I learned of this when I lived in Hawaii near Kilauea. Please post your fantasy poem. I would like to read it. :) ~ Artsie
Gentry Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 10:32 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your interpretation of this pic.
Donnelly Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 7:53 PM
Thank you, Susan. Glad you enjoyed it. :) ~ Artsie
Sands Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations for your win Artsieladie :)
Donnelly Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 7:52 PM
Thank you, Heidi. :) ~ Artsie
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April 1, 2018 at 8:33 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Artsieladie :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Donnelly Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 7:51 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Hope you had a very nice Easter. :) hugs ~ Artsie
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April 1, 2018 at 8:11 AM
Congratulations Artsieladie! :) xomo!
Donnelly Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 7:49 PM
Thank you, Maureen. :) ~ Artsie xx
May Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:24 AM
An enchanting story of pearls, romance and mermaids...Nicely done Sharon...Congrats on your win
Donnelly Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 7:48 PM
Thank you, Joseph, for your kind and supportive words, for sponsoring the contest, and for seeing my poem as a worthy entry. I didn't expect a win and almost didn't enter because of its length. But I loved the challenge and I just had to follow the story to its end. :) ~ Artsie
One Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 5:35 AM
Great storytelling, you really took the image to heart and expressed a wonderful poem...
Donnelly Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Thank you, Silent One. I wasn't sure where I was going to go with this poem at first. I thought though it would be just a poem but then my imagination kicked in and so, it became a story. :)
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 4:06 AM
WOW WOW WOW! When you said you;'d been inspired to write for the contest I wasn't expecting an epic story that could rival one of Grimms fairy stories! An epic rhyme Artsieladie - adding this to my faves. A sure fire contest winner!:-) hugs Jan xx
Donnelly Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Three WOWS and a fav'! WOW! Thank you so much, Jan! For some reason the very first thought that came to my mind when I looked at this picture was 'mermaid' but I don't know why, really. Then it was like, "Now what am I going to do with 'mermaid'?" Well, this is what unfolded and I so enjoyed the challenge. :) hugs - Artsie xx
Donnelly Avatar
March 28, 2018 at 1:17 AM
This is my first entering in a contest. I hope I did everything right for entering a contest here on PoetrySoup. I hope it's not too long, but the contest rules had no line limit stated. What began as a simple thought or two blossomed into telling a poetic style story. I hope this is also okay.
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