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Apparition Approach

1.
You're obscured by maze hedges,  I'm approaching
Creeping around  greenery's edges, encroaching
2.
You'll know when adventure's uncovered, I'm here
 Meet where destiny weds us, fate encroaching
3.
Absorb how I've worked for you, take it on board
Finally, place for tender touch encroaching
4.
No shears were used, I went the long way to find
Ideal man, no sad pretender encroaching 
5.
Exposed to your will, what's your instant gut choice? 
Tenacity steel together encroaching 
6.
Hand held up to block the sun, or is it me? 
Heel turn scrunch on path, terror encroaching 
7.
Disregard jiggles Sigrid's heart, weighted down
Alone shrub omen, surrendour encroaching



        30th August 2020 

Written for Contest :   Ghazal 
       Sponsor: Silent One

             11 syllables

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/30/2020 9:30:00 AM
Wow! well done my friend!
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/30/2020 2:29:00 PM
Hi Bobby. Thank you. I had no idea of Ghazal, it's actually not for me, as I dislike this much repetition in my writing. Ta for comment, dear one.

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