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Apparition

being charmed at ghost tide in my sleep being warmed again morn finds me

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2011 9:42:00 PM

HUM! i THINK ANY KIND OF TIDE FRIGHTENS ME... BUT, THE THOUGHT OF GHOST INVADING MY DREAMS... IS CREEPY... NICE HAIKU...,..P.D.

James Peranteau

Date: 11/11/2011 7:45:00 PM

I was at "Apparittion II" and had to peek at this sir, now, back to II. And, a fine write here sir...To me; a Haiku for true ! Later dude, I mean, sir...*smiles* james

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2011 3:42:00 PM

Good that morn found you instead of the apparition..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/9/2011 3:42:00 PM

Charming ghost tide...sleeping.? and morning..? hmmm..not mourning:) hmm... well i have decided its pick on Daver day..! and so i did, i picked you out) and i think i like your poem a lot,, can't get much worse eh Daver.? (ha ha),, did i get you going..? just a little...? a teensy...?anyway:) all the best Joe..!

Joshua Akinwande

Date: 11/9/2011 7:34:00 AM

nice job Daver...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2011 11:48:00 PM

This is eerie, Daver, in a warm kind of way!! How are you? did Connie ever say anything helpful about our PFT problem?

Daver Austin
Date: 11/9/2011 2:03:00 PM

I told Connie about it, but have heard nothing. daver

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 11/8/2011 7:40:00 AM

Wonderful write I enjoyed reading your poem!--Lori

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 11/7/2011 2:23:00 PM

This is a beautiful haiku, sir. Expecially the third line.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/7/2011 1:35:00 PM

Nice one my friend... love the theme.... Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/7/2011 10:26:00 AM

Oooh, I love the spooky "Ghost Tide," Daver. When it's foggy here, you would swear you were seeing just this. Enjoyed the image of you waking all warm and safe in your bed, my friend. Beautiful haiku! Love, Carolyn