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Apparition

Tendrils of fresh green
misting branches long barren
suddenly appear







Inspired by Carol Browns Springtime contest

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Debbie Guzzi

February 16, 2009 at 2:26 PM

Very nice! blooming perfect! Light & Love Debbie

Arany P.

February 10, 2009 at 8:22 AM

spring is all we await!! love your kaiku!! thank you for you lovely comments!! ~ Arany

Michael Degenhardt

January 22, 2009 at 6:56 AM

This is wonderful in form and the imagery seems so clear with this read. Excellent! Michael

John Rhinem

January 21, 2009 at 6:19 PM

Smile~This sounds like something very extremely wonderful dear lady!!!~ "Hello Precious & Gifted & Radiant Robin!!!"~I am truly & sincerely regretful that I have missed "Your Beauty" these past couple of days!!!~But, "You Are 'Always' Within My Thoughts & Heart With Warmth & Love!!!"~I really like this hope of statement which You seemingly allude to within this piece here~ whether in regards towards Yourself or another!!?~"My Love To You, John!!!":)....On we go....

Maryam Jameela Haniff

January 21, 2009 at 2:38 PM

lovely haiku....pictures spring perfectly....good luck in the contest!.....Maryam

January 21, 2009 at 9:33 AM

Nice use of imagery. Nice take on the contest. Good luck! Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Blessings to you. Karen

Brian Strand

January 21, 2009 at 7:36 AM

Best wishes with this on Robin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Carrie Richards

January 21, 2009 at 7:19 AM

The new beginning...a welcome sign of spring! Awesome haiku! Good luck Robin! ~ Love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins

January 21, 2009 at 6:00 AM

I love the feel of this springtime Haiku. I can't wait for the cold to take a haitus. Well written and thank you for the comments that are always more than welcome. Love, Chris.