Apparition

Tendrils of fresh green
misting branches long barren
suddenly appear







Inspired by Carol Browns Springtime contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/16/2009 2:26:00 PM
Very nice! blooming perfect! Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 2/10/2009 8:22:00 AM
spring is all we await!! love your kaiku!! thank you for you lovely comments!! ~ Arany
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Date: 1/22/2009 6:56:00 AM
This is wonderful in form and the imagery seems so clear with this read. Excellent! Michael
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Date: 1/21/2009 6:19:00 PM
Smile~This sounds like something very extremely wonderful dear lady!!!~ "Hello Precious & Gifted & Radiant Robin!!!"~I am truly & sincerely regretful that I have missed "Your Beauty" these past couple of days!!!~But, "You Are 'Always' Within My Thoughts & Heart With Warmth & Love!!!"~I really like this hope of statement which You seemingly allude to within this piece here~ whether in regards towards Yourself or another!!?~"My Love To You, John!!!":)....On we go....
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Date: 1/21/2009 2:38:00 PM
lovely haiku....pictures spring perfectly....good luck in the contest!.....Maryam
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Date: 1/21/2009 9:33:00 AM
Nice use of imagery. Nice take on the contest. Good luck! Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 1/21/2009 7:36:00 AM
Best wishes with this on Robin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 1/21/2009 7:19:00 AM
The new beginning...a welcome sign of spring! Awesome haiku! Good luck Robin! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/21/2009 6:00:00 AM
I love the feel of this springtime Haiku. I can't wait for the cold to take a haitus. Well written and thank you for the comments that are always more than welcome. Love, Chris.
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Date: 1/21/2009 5:41:00 AM
beautiful spring haiku! Love, Kristin
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Date: 1/21/2009 4:15:00 AM
Lovely Spring imagery. Well done. Good luck in the contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/20/2009 11:57:00 PM
A splendid title, and lovely expressive HAIKU! BRAVO Robin!! Love and hugs, Keith
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Date: 1/20/2009 11:44:00 PM
Green shoots are so encouraging.Nice one Robin.rgds Brian & thanks for youe welcome comments
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Date: 1/20/2009 10:44:00 PM
Roll on Spring , Robin ... Great Haiku in perfect format ....
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