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"HALF-AWAKENED SUN" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 17 JULY 2017, MY PHOTO,©

Half-awaken sun Appalled was by the day's toil Herculean task! © Demetrios Trifiatis 17 July 2017

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Date: 7/17/2017 1:34:00 PM
I wonder if the Sun does tire? A well done Haiku.
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Date: 7/17/2017 4:25:00 PM
Well, the scientists say that one day it will die thus each millennium must be getting more and more tired! Haha! Thank you my friend MLK for lovely visit!
Date: 7/17/2017 9:51:00 AM
Just getting out of bed can be a task...nicely done my friend.
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Date: 7/17/2017 4:23:00 PM
For the majority of people it is my friend, Chris! I just jump up and off I go! thank you for you dear visit and comment!
Date: 7/17/2017 9:14:00 AM
A wonderful Haiku Dear Demetrios. Always welcome your words of Wisdom dear friend... Maria
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Date: 7/17/2017 4:21:00 PM
Thank you very much my kind friend, Maria for your lovely comment! You too kind!
Date: 7/17/2017 6:23:00 AM
Life can be a Herculean task, especially when there are obstacles to over come.. Great haiku..
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Date: 7/17/2017 7:02:00 AM
Life without obstacles is not life my friend, SO. Thank you so much for your kind visit and comment!
Date: 7/17/2017 5:29:00 AM
You have delighted me with a contrite little Haiku, which is tremendously written with a skillful hand, filling me with an awe that is inspiring and invigorated! What a fabulous poem my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/17/2017 5:59:00 AM
You are so generous my friend, Russell! Thank you so much for your gracious comment!
Date: 7/17/2017 5:20:00 AM
- A new unused day, every opportunity available - Beautiful haiku, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/17/2017 6:00:00 AM
Yes, my friend, you are so right! Have a lovely week dearest, Anne-Lise and thank you for your precious visit and comment! Hugs!
Date: 7/17/2017 2:23:00 AM
Awesome haiku! I really like this one, Demetrios!
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Date: 7/17/2017 6:00:00 AM
So good to see you back my friend, WW! I do appreciate your visits and comments! Thank you!