Appalled

Half-awaken sun

Appalled was by the day's toil

Herculean task!






© Demetrios Trifiatis
         17 July 2017

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/17/2017 1:34:00 PM

I wonder if the Sun does tire? A well done Haiku.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/17/2017 4:25:00 PM

Well, the scientists say that one day it will die thus each millennium must be getting more and more tired! Haha! Thank you my friend MLK for lovely visit!

Chris Green

Date: 7/17/2017 9:51:00 AM

Just getting out of bed can be a task...nicely done my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/17/2017 4:23:00 PM

For the majority of people it is my friend, Chris! I just jump up and off I go! thank you for you dear visit and comment!

Maria Williams

Date: 7/17/2017 9:14:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku Dear Demetrios. Always welcome your words of Wisdom dear friend... Maria

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/17/2017 4:21:00 PM

Thank you very much my kind friend, Maria for your lovely comment! You too kind!

Silent One

Date: 7/17/2017 6:23:00 AM

Life can be a Herculean task, especially when there are obstacles to over come.. Great haiku..

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/17/2017 7:02:00 AM

Life without obstacles is not life my friend, SO. Thank you so much for your kind visit and comment!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/17/2017 5:29:00 AM

You have delighted me with a contrite little Haiku, which is tremendously written with a skillful hand, filling me with an awe that is inspiring and invigorated! What a fabulous poem my friend! Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/17/2017 5:59:00 AM

You are so generous my friend, Russell! Thank you so much for your gracious comment!