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Appalachian Trail

long after midnight he points out the big dipper... grass for our pillows ___________________________________________ for Charles Henderson's Contest: "No Contest Contest" /resubmitted for PD's Contest "Any haiku will do"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2013 11:41:00 PM

aha, that one I loved from before. BIG congrats, Carrie. Are you seeing this winners list. So many incredible haiku I'm reading tonight.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/22/2013 5:03:00 PM

A night with the stars...My son and I used to do this when he was a youngster and I taught him about the constellations...Great memories! - Tim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/22/2013 2:42:00 PM

Reads like really roughing it..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Donna Jones

Date: 7/22/2013 12:45:00 PM

A really awesome win Carrie....congratulations

Kash Poet

Date: 7/22/2013 11:37:00 AM

Congrats Carrie on your win.Loved this one on my first read.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/22/2013 6:42:00 AM

I love this one Carrie. Congrats on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2013 1:09:00 AM

- A winning haiku, with great quality, Carrie !! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 7/21/2013 10:53:00 PM

Beautiful. Many congrats Carrie.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 8:00:00 PM

Carrie :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/4/2013 9:26:00 AM

Congrats Carrie~A.O

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/3/2013 5:39:00 PM

Carrie I loved this when I first read. Congratulations on the win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/3/2013 7:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved second placement, Carrie. Well done. :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/3/2013 6:19:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie, nice one xx

Ray Dillard

Date: 5/2/2013 10:13:00 PM

Another top finish! Congratulations! RAY

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2013 9:33:00 PM

Carrie, a wonderful win in the contest... :-) Linda

Judy Konos

Date: 5/2/2013 2:58:00 PM

Good one Carrie....Congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2013 2:14:00 PM

ALL RIGHT. Big congrats to you. I am getting a big head. charles named me as someone who can do haiku for his contest!!! I'm glad I tried it now!

Kash Poet

Date: 4/28/2013 1:11:00 PM

Good one!!

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 4/25/2013 5:33:00 PM

Love your Haiku Carrie. Great metaphor in your last line. Warm Smiles, Connie

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 4/22/2013 11:01:00 AM

Pleasant little nighttime portrait here. I like what you have done with this haiku. So many things included...

Jack Horne

Date: 4/21/2013 4:41:00 PM

love picturing this sweet romantic scene, Carrie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/21/2013 2:34:00 PM

tremendous interplay of images with a defining twist, carrie... thanks for your warmth.. glad to read you again.. and congrats on your 1st place in cyndi's contest about interpreting my poem.. just read the list and your stunning write earlier... you are awesome and i am deeply touched... :) huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/21/2013 5:49:00 AM

- Beautiful, Carrie! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2013 11:01:00 PM

Carrie. You are probably one of my most faved poets. And I would do this one as well but my list of faves for your poems is too long already, so I am waiting for your book, ok? I want to be first in line for your haiku book if they all look like this one!!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/20/2013 10:00:00 PM

WOW! That must have been an awesome experience. I love looking at the different constellations. The universe speaks with an eloquence that you have captured here so well. :)