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Apocalyptic Now

The way is not seen The blinding lights are heavy Covering my eyes Long lines of saints and sinners This world is nearing an end

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/5/2011 5:14:00 PM

I am certainly not the one who is offended. You anger comes through loud and clear. What I wrote was only my opinion. I thought that's what this site was all about - getting feedback from other people. Excuse me for trying to help your poem be better.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/5/2011 9:44:00 AM

I understand your post to me, but why should I HAVE to read the bible to interpret your vagueness? I know what the apocolypse is. I just wanted to know what you wanted your audience to get out of this poem. If the answer is nothing, then why post it at all?

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/5/2011 7:57:00 AM

What are you trying to convey here? Emotion? An image? I don't really feel any impending doom. What lights are you talking about? Where do the lines go? how do you know the world is nearing an end? I'm sure you know what you mean, but as your intended audience, I don't. Give me more.