Apocalypse Risen

Moon light impotent Stables darkness impenetrable For only the horseman may enter Those without souls do find their way World will end by hand of few men Those incompetent of compassion and caring The ones who look out only for their heir While suffering and strife consume A time will come when the mass will form Breaking the barriers, seemingly impervious Where all may have what they do need Water, love, home and seed Until such time, which may never appear Stables darkness will remain Its halls quite For the four horses are being ridden today

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Date: 9/12/2013 8:34:00 AM
awesome win ~SKAT~
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 9/12/2013 8:37:00 AM
Thanks SKAT :)
Date: 9/7/2013 12:34:00 PM
A fine winning poem. congratulations. Favorite line "The ones who look out only for their heir While suffering and strife consume "..all completely stunning verses :)
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 9/7/2013 5:19:00 PM
Thank you very much. It just frustrates me that those who have plenty want more and more while whining that they need to help thy neighbor.
Date: 9/5/2013 8:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 9/6/2013 6:32:00 AM
Thank you Danesh.
Date: 9/5/2013 7:38:00 PM
great poem! I can see why it is in the winner's circle...congrats on your win :)
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 9/6/2013 6:32:00 AM
Thank you Sandra glad you liked it.
Date: 9/5/2013 3:29:00 PM
Congratulations on a coving piece.
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 9/6/2013 6:32:00 AM
Thanks Richard.
Date: 9/5/2013 3:10:00 PM
Adam, well done...congrats...PD
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 9/6/2013 6:33:00 AM
Thanks PD :)
Date: 9/5/2013 12:54:00 PM
Great scary winning work..Enjoyed reading your winner..Congrats..Sara
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 9/5/2013 1:47:00 PM
Thanks Sara, congrats to you as well :)
Date: 8/29/2013 10:04:00 AM
We have seen the 4 horsemen in every millennium yet somehow we prevail. Darkness hides the rays of the sun but morning comes every 24 hours. Allan
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 9/6/2013 6:35:00 AM
Very true. Thanks Allan.
Date: 8/9/2013 9:43:00 AM
Intriguing! Deep.
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 9/6/2013 6:35:00 AM
Glad you liked it Gerald.
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