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Apocalypse

The whale sings and I weep, The world groans and I ache, The wind gusts and I bend, The surf sighs and I rage, The babe cries and I mourn, The mountains shift and I flinch, The earth dies and I wear black. Trisha Sugarek, 2011

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Date: 3/19/2017 8:00:00 AM
...and the world continues to turn. An interesting write Trisha. I feel helplessness and defeat in your words.
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Date: 5/2/2014 12:18:00 PM
Wow! Trisha. Lovely...strong...yet sad...I really enjoyed this!! glad I clicked on it. cu // paul
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:25:00 AM
Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, trisha
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Trisha Sugarek
Date: 4/28/2014 7:31:00 AM
Thank you for your support on this awesome site! Trish
Date: 4/27/2014 8:05:00 PM
This is well done literary piece Trisha. I enjoyed my visit... Verlena
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Trisha Sugarek
Date: 4/28/2014 7:33:00 AM
Thank you, Verlena, for your support and kind words, Trish
Date: 4/17/2014 8:44:00 AM
such a sad poem, but there is not much to do when nature changes but to bend along with it and accept it. Thanks for sharing
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Trisha Sugarek
Date: 4/28/2014 7:32:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words...Trish
Date: 4/9/2014 10:18:00 PM
Trisha, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/9/2014 4:42:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Trisha :) - I choose your first good written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/9/2014 3:08:00 AM
Trisha, ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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