Aphasia

Hint: This is not a poem.

If one can put words in feelings then
things will go easy for me.
And if feelings will have words with them
then things will never be.

…

Let’s start with the blue bird -
a mane, that’s what you shall have;
because a birdie with no mane
is an owl exposed to sunlight.

Let’s not forget the blue moon -
a muzzle, that will be handy for you;
Let all your screams dwarf the stars
and for once shine.

And the blue eagle -
a character. All you have is
a large beak and rowdy feathers!
Fly not with false pride.

…

And if this is not coming across,
all I can say is that, “You have
to have an eye for a poem and
an ear for a nice painting.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/11/2024 9:57:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/21/2016 9:39:00 PM
Rory Ian Bualan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 9:41:00 PM
Rory, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 2/6/2010 9:36:00 PM
A very nice brain workouts, it stimulates creative thinking. Nice sharing this Rory. (^_^). Noel
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Date: 2/6/2010 4:48:00 PM
Creative piece. Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 2/6/2010 1:34:00 PM
interesting write!
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Date: 2/6/2010 9:56:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all ... as this delight tonight... unique piece of poetry ... I understood and enjoyed it thoroughly.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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