Nick Bagnall Poet Rhyme

Apathy

The last poem I posted
was viewed by so many
56 hits in one day
And now that I've boasted
(as that's quite high for me)
There's something I'd like to say

Please leave a message
For examples, next passage
Your apathy drives me insane

- it set me aglow
- what lovely flow
- your poem is far to mundane
- I sat and laughed
- you're poem is daft
- it's rubbish please try again
- your spelling is hateful
- A two and be grateful
- I don't understand please explain
- I don't care for your style
- you made me smile
- How sad is your little refrain

What ever you say
I'll be grateful this day
Please write a note, ease my pain





Thanks to "Cute" Susan Simpkins for being the only person to comment on my last poem
Cheers

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Richard Palmer June 13, 2012 at 7:44 AM ha ha ha,interact is the name of the game,so simple,oh so plain,please don't blame,you just have to do the same..great write Nick..

Anne-Lise Andresen May 29, 2012 at 3:17 AM Nick, you have a smile in this poem..... Very well done. - Wish you a lovely and sunny day. - oxox Anne-Lise Nick Bagnall May 30, 2012 at 6:12 AM Thanks for the comment, yes it's suppose to be a bit tongue in cheek, it just made me laugh that I'd had a huge number of hits on a poem and only one comment, which incidently was only one word long :)

Black Eyed Susan May 1, 2012 at 7:32 AM this poem made me smile too. you might want to look at my "fluff" poem - we're 2 of a kind!

Gwendolen Song April 25, 2012 at 5:32 AM Dear Nick B, I'm writing this note to help ease your pain, I found this poem of yours whose comments were lame. Could your little poem deserve such pain?...I think this poem of yours is mighty fine, it's laced with perfect poetic rhyme, AND I PROMISE TO LEAVE A STRONGER MESSAGE NEXT TIME, your poetry friend, Gwen