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Apathy

The last poem I posted
was viewed by so many
56 hits in one day
And now that I've boasted
(as that's quite high for me)
There's something I'd like to say

Please leave a message
For examples, next passage
Your apathy drives me insane

- it set me aglow
- what lovely flow
- your poem is far to mundane
- I sat and laughed
- you're poem is daft
- it's rubbish please try again
- your spelling is hateful
- A two and be grateful
- I don't understand please explain
- I don't care for your style
- you made me smile
- How sad is your little refrain

What ever you say
I'll be grateful this day
Please write a note, ease my pain





Thanks to "Cute" Susan Simpkins for being the only person to comment on my last poem
Cheers

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Richard Palmer Date: 6/13/2012 7:44:00 AM ha ha ha,interact is the name of the game,so simple,oh so plain,please don't blame,you just have to do the same..great write Nick.. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/29/2012 3:17:00 AM Nick, you have a smile in this poem..... Very well done. - Wish you a lovely and sunny day. - oxox Anne-Lise Login to Reply Nick Bagnall Date: 5/30/2012 6:12:00 AM Thanks for the comment, yes it's suppose to be a bit tongue in cheek, it just made me laugh that I'd had a huge number of hits on a poem and only one comment, which incidently was only one word long :)

Black Eyed Susan Date: 5/1/2012 7:32:00 AM this poem made me smile too. you might want to look at my "fluff" poem - we're 2 of a kind! Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 4/25/2012 5:32:00 AM Dear Nick B, I'm writing this note to help ease your pain, I found this poem of yours whose comments were lame. Could your little poem deserve such pain?...I think this poem of yours is mighty fine, it's laced with perfect poetic rhyme, AND I PROMISE TO LEAVE A STRONGER MESSAGE NEXT TIME, your poetry friend, Gwen Login to Reply