Apathy

The last poem I posted was viewed by so many 56 hits in one day And now that I've boasted (as that's quite high for me) There's something I'd like to say Please leave a message For examples, next passage Your apathy drives me insane - it set me aglow - what lovely flow - your poem is far to mundane - I sat and laughed - you're poem is daft - it's rubbish please try again - your spelling is hateful - A two and be grateful - I don't understand please explain - I don't care for your style - you made me smile - How sad is your little refrain What ever you say I'll be grateful this day Please write a note, ease my pain Thanks to "Cute" Susan Simpkins for being the only person to comment on my last poem Cheers

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Richard Palmer

Date: 6/13/2012 7:44:00 AM

ha ha ha,interact is the name of the game,so simple,oh so plain,please don't blame,you just have to do the same..great write Nick..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/29/2012 3:17:00 AM

Nick, you have a smile in this poem..... Very well done. - Wish you a lovely and sunny day. - oxox Anne-Lise

Nick Bagnall
Date: 5/30/2012 6:12:00 AM

Thanks for the comment, yes it's suppose to be a bit tongue in cheek, it just made me laugh that I'd had a huge number of hits on a poem and only one comment, which incidently was only one word long :)

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 5/1/2012 7:32:00 AM

this poem made me smile too. you might want to look at my "fluff" poem - we're 2 of a kind!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/25/2012 5:32:00 AM

Dear Nick B, I'm writing this note to help ease your pain, I found this poem of yours whose comments were lame. Could your little poem deserve such pain?...I think this poem of yours is mighty fine, it's laced with perfect poetic rhyme, AND I PROMISE TO LEAVE A STRONGER MESSAGE NEXT TIME, your poetry friend, Gwen